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HEAVEN AND HELL: 26. "Rebellion"

Sunday, May 30, 2004

"With everything falling neatly into place Inara flirts briefly with second thoughts. River tries to warn Mal as he gets caught up in the preparations for war."

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TITLE: "REBELLION"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "CHAMELEON".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "With everything falling neatly into place Inara flirts

briefly with second thoughts. River tries to warn Mal as he gets

caught up in the preparations for war."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"REBELLION"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Inara Serra could not manipulate or access the Captain's mind. In fact she could get nowhere near it. The light brushes she had managed when they were both on Serenity were as distant now as any dream. Or nightmare. At times she thought she detected something but it was so illusive and ephemeral that it defied description. Not that it mattered. She had Davy and wherever Davy went his protective brother was sure to follow. On some level she was impressed that Mal was able to block her so efficiently but some instinct sensed it was not something he realised he was doing. Thinking about how that was even possible was a distraction she could not afford to dwell on. Her sensors were blinking, confirming the craft approaching on an intercept vector. She resisted the temptation to run. Even now after all the years she had spent in service to the cause they still made her feel uncomfortable. Vulnerable. Exposed to the dark side of their nature. Wondering just how she had reached that point of no return.

Pushing down an instinctive feeling of repugnance she calmed herself down and embraced the training instilled in her. By the time the ship reached her she was ready, the sleek Alliance vessel in direct contrast to their huge Capital Ships. She d

Comments
Sunday, 30 May 2004 21:33
wow! Not much more to say than that. Love the direction you took inara and finally understand all you had her do. Nice to finally be getting all the pieces to the puzzle.
Monday, 31 May 2004 08:31
The story's really kicking *pigu*! Completely enjoying the way this is progressing, and looking forward to seeing how you handle the return to Hera.

I do hope the captain has some of those ships in orbit on watch and they're not just all sitting on the ground waiting to get nuked.

Very rich development of Inara.
Tuesday, 01 June 2004 16:13
Ali, just so shiny where you're taking us on this journey...waiting anxiously for the next chapter...
Wednesday, 02 June 2004 13:12
Really like the way you depict the weight of the responsibility on Mal's shoulders and his conflicted feelings about it.

Another enjoyable chapter to read.

Hope this fic doesn't end any time soon.

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