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Butterfly: Chapter 2

Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Did the piece of the puzzle fall neatly into place? Or did it just reveal a bigger puzzle?

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Ok, so chapter. Hope you guys enjoy. I've really been enjoying writing these.

Chapter 1 is here: http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=12098

Comments are more then welcome.

Disclaimer: Serenity is not my creation. It belongs to Joss. I make no money off this, blah blah blah, copy right this, trademark that :)

They stood in shocked silence over Kaylee's new found brother. In the silence, they could hear his breathing getting even more ragged by the second.

Mal broke the silence, "What did you just say?" He was shaking his head as he spoke.

"Robert, oh my God, Robert." Kaylee was getting closer and closer to becoming hysterical. Mal shook her shoulders slightly to get her attention. She looked up at the captain, tears running down her cheeks. "He's my brother cap'n. Please, help me get him onto Serenity."

Mal had begun to open his mouth in protest, but was cut off as Simon, and surprisingly, Jayne moved in unison to pick the man up off the ground. Mal started to chuckle at it all. The last time they took strangers on board...

"Let's get him to the infirmiry." Simon stated matter of factly. Jayne nodded. The man, Robert, wasn't all that heavy, especially for two men to carry him.

"I don't want him on the ship," Zoe stated from out of no where, folding her arms across her chest, "Patch him up if you have to, but toss him back out when you're done," she called after Jayne and Simon.

"Zoe..." Kaylee began, pleading, "Why?"

Mal and Inara stood back in silence. Neither of them knew what to say. Mal had had his power usurped twice in the last 20 minutes. Inara was still rocked by the news of the man being Kaylee's brother. She could only begin to wonder how torn up Kaylee must be.

"Reasons." Zoe turned her back on everyone. She still hadn't quite recovered from Wash's death. If anything, she'd become even more reserved since then. But this was a surprise, even to Mal.

Mal looked at the ground, then to the setting sun, then back to Kaylee, putting his hands on his hips "I'm n

Comments
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 15:22
I really like your crazy River voice. And this story does have me intrigued.
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 15:40
This is getting interesting, I want to see how it all turns out.
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 15:48
Hmm, interesting. I can't wait to find out why Zoe is so adamantly opposed to Robert being on Serenity. Not only what she knows but HOW she knows it is the thing rattling around in my mind. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
RUBBERDUCK
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 23:48
Yeah, crazy River is probably my favorite to write. As for the How's and Why's, you'll have to tune in sometime later to see how it all pans out.

I'd like to thank you guys for the positive comments. I appreciate it very much. :)

Keep Flying.
Thursday, 03 August 2006 06:52
Actually sounds like Zoe's taking her agony out on Simon and River, via Robert...her comment about the "the last time..." strikes me as a reference to the pilot episode and the events leading up the end of the BDM.

Still...wanna see where this goes, RD ;)

BEB
Friday, 24 November 2006 02:02
I'm tuned in, but the story seems to have ended. =( more please?

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