Against My Will
Tuesday, August 1, 2006
S/K fic. Fleshed out scenes from the series, showing the slow, gradual bond that formed between the medic and the mechanic.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 2262
RATING: 9.0 (PG13)
SERIES: FIREFLY
Against My Will
Simon knows what he needs to do. He has to stay focused…has to be there 100% for his sister as he searches for a way to bring her back to herself. The trouble is, the more he tries to stay focused, the more he finds himself seeking out the one person who can change everything for him. If he’d just let her.
Added on moments from the series involving Simon and Kaylee.
This will be a multi-part story that touches on the many different episodes of the series, and what I felt could have been going on as side-plots throughout. Will involve all the other characters, but the basis will be S/K.
**Author’s note. I own nothing. The original lines are Joss Whedon’s and that’s why he’s a household name and I’m not.
**Also, if anyone can tell me where they get their Chinese translations, I would be forever in your debt. I would love to add that flavor to these stories.
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CH. 1 – SERENITY
Simon weaved his way through the throngs of street urchins and their makeshift booths, trying to block out their high pitched voices as they begged and bartered, swindled and cajoled their way to what he could only assume would be their means for procuring dinner that night. He barely spared any of them a glance as he shuffled quickly among the crowd, thinking that if he’d had to do it all again, he’d have opted for less formal wear.
He hadn’t realized how out of place he’d look here on Persephone, simply by being himself. That was most decidedly not the plan. Out of place, in fact, was exactly the opposite of what he was going for at this point. There wasn’t anything he could do about it now, however, so he redoubled his efforts into finding a ship that would carry him and his sister as far away from here as he could. He rotated where he stood, looking with ignorance over the half a dozen ships that were docked in a wide semi-circle around the town square. He sighed in frustration, realizing that all of those years of meticu
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 12:48
Well being a fair S/K fan I'm just about as happy as... well, awesome job. I'm glad there's more coming. Good storytelling. Thanks!
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 15:14
First off, here are two sites that I use for Chinese:
http://julesrakowski.proboards61.com/index.cgi?board=general&action=display&thread=1130563332http://fireflychinese.home.att.net/episode.htmlSecond, what a great story! I love fic that expands on scenes that were in the series, or film.
>When Mal spoke next, Simon finally realized why he inspired such loyalty from his crew. It was the first time Simon felt as if Mal saw him as anything resembling a human being who just needed a little help, and it served to shed Mal in an entirely new light in his mind. Maybe, just maybe, the psychotic captain was, himself, human after all.
I really liked this sentance most of all. I don't know why, but it definitely stood out.
Keep up the good work. I'm definitely looking forward to more.
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 15:33
This was a wonderful piece and am excited to read that you have more to come!! You have woven a lovely expansion of Simon's thoughts and I am definitely looking forward to your next post!
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 17:18
I love this idea of exploring their relationship and sprinkling it with bits from the show and then original scenes! I can't wait to see where else this goes, it's a great start!
Thursday, 03 August 2006 03:46
That was awesome. Very good. Exactly how I pictured that whole episode from Simon's view.
SHINY!
Thursday, 03 August 2006 06:22
Oh yeah....this is the stuff...right here;)
Magnificent work, snoopygubs! You definitely channelled Simon perfectly here, especially during the moments when he's still riding high with Core personality;)
BEB
Thursday, 03 August 2006 13:24
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Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:11
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just h
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:12
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:13
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:13
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:13
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:13
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:14
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:14
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:14
This is the best fanfic I've ever read, and I've read hundreds. It was so perfectly in character, and it's what I thought should have been in the show. I'm so so goad you had Simon and Kaylee talking AFTER everything, after she's been shot. And I love his thoughts when Jayne and Book are taking her to the engine room to run from the reavers. EXACTLY what Simon would have been thinking :D ohhh I just absolutely LOVED IT!!! So so shiny!! There are no words to describe just how perfect this is!!! Off to eagerly read the next two!! Shiny<3
Sunday, 11 September 2011 06:19
Whoa fff.net fritzed out on me there. Sorry about that
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