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Rewriting History

Friday, July 21, 2006

I needed to fix my old one. A what if. Takes place inbetween the series and the movie. Pease let me know what you think...and please be nice. :)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1894    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This take place after Objects in Space and after Book and Inara leave the ship. It’s more of a “What if…” It’s kinda bad. I’m still not used to the fan fic writing. It was just an idea I wanted to play with.

I don’t own these characters…I just like to use them for my own amusement. :)

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“Captain, there is a message coming in for you,” Wash, the pilot’s voice sounded over the intercom.

Mal was cleaning out Inara’s old shuttle so he asked to take it in there. He turned on the screen to see a girl, about the same age as River with darker features,brown hair and big brown eyes. She had a familiar face but he had never met her before.

“Captain Malcolm Reynolds?” the girl said.

“This is he. How can I help ya, darlin’?”

She cleared her throat.

“Mal, I know you’re on your way to Lilac to do that job for Fanty and Mingo, but don’t. Please, don’t.”

Mal was bewildered as to how a young girl he’d never met knew exactly what they were doing. “I’m sorry?”

“Please, Mal, don’t do it. I beg you.”

“I don’t even know who you are,” Mal stated calmly.

“That’s not important right now. I just need you to do this for me, please.”

“Fanty and Mingo won’t be so kind when I tell them that a teenage girl told me not to do the job they wanted me to do. Now, what’s the deal? Why don’t you want us to do this job?”

“Captain, if I tell you something will you promise not to tell the rest of your crew?”

“I can’t make such promises, but let me hear what you have to say.”

“This will sound crazy, but I know everything about all of you. I know you and Zoë fought in the war together, I know Jayne’s favorite gun is named Vera, I know your pilot like to play with toy dinosaurs, I know you’re in love with Inara…”

“Whoa, hold on just a second, anyone could have told you that stuff, are you friends with Inara? Are you a whor…I mean companion too?”

“I know the Tams are on your ship and that they are wanted by the Alliance.”

Mal’s heart stopped beating for a split second. Was

Comments
Friday, 21 July 2006 09:50
Really good start, I just hope the whole messing with time thing doesn't end up making things even more complicated that normal. Should make it interesting though! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 21 July 2006 21:49
Great stuff, mynameisliz...though I do question how fast you had Mal at least partially accept young Ella's claims. At least to me, Mal would need a whole crapload more proof to even think about risking Serenity and the crew on a task like this.

But hey...maybe you'll assuage my fears in part 2 (which I noticed you've posted:D)

BEB

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