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Man of Honor?

Monday, July 3, 2006

Book and Jayne chat on their way to help Nandi and company in Heart of Gold. No real spoilers.

You just know Book wouldn't be able to keep all his preaching to himself during those workouts.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1784    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Man of Honor?

by: Jerrie L. Hooper

Stuff: All disclaimers apply. I don’t own them. I own very little of anything. I wasn’t going to post this until I had finished another fic I was working on (Buffy related) but couldn’t wait. Un-betaed and not exactly the ending I wanted but hey, nothing’s perfect.

River sat on the catwalk, her legs dangling over the edge while her arms looped around the rail. Her eyes were on Jayne and Book, watching the methodical repetitions of their workout.

Book and Jayne had grown accustomed to her frequent presence and paid no attention.

Book was uncharacteristically searching for words as they filled the time on their way to help Inara's friends.

Jayne's eagerness to "help" after learning that their clients were residents of a brothel, lead Book to believe that Jayne would be taking advantage of the services available.

"Jayne, sometimes people are put into positions where they have no choice on some of the things they have to do to survive. It is unfortunate that some are willing to take advantage of those circumstances."

"Huh?" Jayne continued lifting, but now had a crease between his brows expressing his puzzlement.

Book gathered his patience. He had tried to broach this subject with Jayne in the past, but apparently subtlety was lost on the mercenary.

"Jayne, do you really feel right paying these women for the use of their bodies?"

"Payin' 'em?!? I thought since we was helpin' out we'd get the sexin' for free? Ya know, kinda like payment."

"But do you think you should take advantage of their situation?"

"Way I figure it, they already got people takin' 'vantage and not doin' 'em any kindness while they're at it. Least we ain't makin' the situation worse."

"That is yet to be seen," said Book wryly before continuing, "Have you ever thought of going the traditional route - courting a girl, getting married. There are advantages to that, you know. Companionship, a helpmate..." when Book saw that Jayne was looking unimpressed

Comments
Monday, 03 July 2006 04:10
i like this, very insightful. I think you captured the essence of each character.
Monday, 03 July 2006 05:09
I liked this. well written and in character. I often wonder when reading fanfic here though, if we give Jayne a little too much credit, im not sure the BDS or BDM make him out to be quite so noble as we like ot think. But I can certainly see Jayne logic behind his comments.
Monday, 03 July 2006 09:06
I like stuff about Book and Jayne ...Well Mal too.

you write good.

keep it up.

Jayne is right, aint no need in draggin a helpless female through the feelins if ya aint gotta.
Monday, 03 July 2006 10:11
This was a great insight into Jayne and showed that a lot more thinking goes into his actions that folk might at first suppose. Terrific! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 20 December 2006 15:08
"The view from the black will change your mind on lots of stuff."

So true - the black being a metaphor anyway. I really thought that that was the perfect moment in the story, but I was wrong.

Neither noticed River, still sitting on the catwalk. She was adding this perception of the male/female relationship into the maze she was building by observing the relationships that surrounded her: the close, though sometimes volatile marriage of Zoe and Wash; the unacknowledged feelings of Inara and Mal; the cautious back and forth of Kaylee and Simon (the boob); the abstinence of the preacherman; and now Jayne.

That was the perfect moment.

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