Blue Sun Room GRAPHICS - IMAGES
partially complete drawing 'o summer
Sunday, June 18, 2006
k, this is *not* done, or particularly close really, (for god sake just ignore the nose, thats gonna need a lot of work later on.) still doesnt really look like her imo, but i thought i'd see if any of the actual artists here (ie not me- this is kinda a one time thing for me) have any feedback/suggestions. so if you do please share!
also, i *think* i fixed the size this time! and the picture is pretty low quality, it does look a mite better.
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Monday, 19 June 2006 06:35
Photoshop will sort out the problems of cropping the image etc...and image resize...its tricky though..my first image was waaaaaayyyy to big too...keep up with the art , your tonal work (shading etc)is good
Saturday, 24 June 2006 03:14
All right, you asked for some advise so here goes.
This is not criticism so please forgive me if it seems like there's a lot of stuff.
The eye brow on the left side could move in a little and here eyes are looking in slightly different directions. Center the pupil on the right a bit. Extend the ears downward and something seems wrong with the forehead. It might be a little broad or maybe it's something about the hairline. The sides of the forehead just seem a off. Sorry, not quite sure what's wrong there but it's bugging me.
I hope that helped. And I would like to say that this is actually pretty good. There is some nice shading, the mouth looks pretty good (they can be vey difficult) and you got her face shaped right. I can't wait to see the finished version.
This is not criticism so please forgive me if it seems like there's a lot of stuff.
The eye brow on the left side could move in a little and here eyes are looking in slightly different directions. Center the pupil on the right a bit. Extend the ears downward and something seems wrong with the forehead. It might be a little broad or maybe it's something about the hairline. The sides of the forehead just seem a off. Sorry, not quite sure what's wrong there but it's bugging me.
I hope that helped. And I would like to say that this is actually pretty good. There is some nice shading, the mouth looks pretty good (they can be vey difficult) and you got her face shaped right. I can't wait to see the finished version.
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