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HEAVEN AND HELL: 20. "Walking Soft"

Wednesday, April 28, 2004

River waits for the right time to act while carefully maintaining an outward calm. Jayne is all kinds of confused over the Preacher's presence on Serenity. Mal slowly discovers more of his brother's plan."

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TITLE: "WALKING SOFT"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "THE CALL OF BLOOD"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "River waits for the right time to act while

carefully maintaining an outward calm. Jayne is all kinds of

confused over the Preacher's presence on Serenity. Mal

slowly discovers more of his brother's plan."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"WALKING SOFT"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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"The first time ever I saw your face

I thought the sun rose in your eyes

And the moon and the stars were the gifts you gave

To the night and the empty stars my love

To the night and the empty stars..."

- 'The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face' sung by Elvis Presley

He felt like a man bound heart and soul in terrible grief so deep was his sense of loss. Echoes of her touch skimmed his senses and touched him deep inside. River. How would he ever be able to make it up to her? To love her so deeply and leave her so easily as this? Yet every time he felt like weakening and turning back he would look at his brother and his heart would flutter with a joy he had long given up ever feeling again. So many memories and emotions were wrapped up in the bond of brotherhood they shared. This was family. This was blood. This was a loyalty that ran through him from head to foot and ruled him from cradle to grave. He had lost so much. So many people he had loved and cherished. He was determined not to lose his brother too. No matter the cost. But oh. The terrible cost.

It was dark now and the men moved by starlight. A pale passive moon shining through whispers of cloud high in the inky firmam

Comments
Wednesday, 28 April 2004 15:22
Ooh its good to see Sherrif Bowman appear again.

Alison - does this take place AFTER the events of your previous series, or should we assume the previous series did not take place?
Wednesday, 28 April 2004 18:14
Even in extraordinary circumstances you still make the characters react believably. And I know you won't let it last, but right now I like how things are going. Good work!
Wednesday, 28 April 2004 20:35
Britchick, this series happens *after* The Forgotten Realm series. All the stories with semi-recurring characters are in the correct sequence unless it is being told in flashbacks. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 30 April 2004 07:20
AliD--Good heavens! This follows "Forgotten Realm"?! You are very, very mean to your characters. That's a compliment, BTW--makes for good reading. But when this is done you really should write these people a nice holiday somewhere. A few pages where nothing goes wrong. Maybe a nude beach ;-)
Friday, 30 April 2004 08:26
I love the irony of it being Jayne most bothered by Books "betrayal" and Mal giving him a second chance. \

Another awesome chapter!! :-)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 03 May 2004 21:50
Hey Guildsister, you mean with *naked swimming*? Could be Wash is having a bad influence on you...Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 13 May 2004 09:06
Another great chapter. I realise I like the way you often remove Mal from Serenity so that his character doesn't overshadow the others and they get time to shine in their own right. Particularly Jayne. You have totally convinced me that he's a good guy at heart.

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