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HEAVEN AND HELL: 15. "HIdden"

Thursday, April 8, 2004

"Book makes a decision and while Inara tries to avoid making one. Malcolm and Davy have an intensive heart to heart the outcome of which will have a profound effect on them all."

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TITLE: "HIDDEN"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "PUZZLE PIECES"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Book makes a decision while Inara tries to avoid

one. Malcolm and Davy have an intensive heart to heart the

outcome of which will have a profound effect on them all."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"HIDDEN"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Inara Serra kept her thoughts shuttered long after Book had gone. Knew her own role in this was far from over and was disturbed by the way in which she had interpreted what should have been a straightforward mission. She could fool the Shepherd but it would be a different thing entirely when the time came to face the Inner Council. Time to send a wave and face the music but first she needed to buy a little time. Diamond Harry kept watch outside her rented rooms while she considered her options. She was strangely fond of the ugly squat man knowing he would die for her and thank her for the privilege. It was an odd relationship. Usually sacrifice did not affect her. Suffering was always someone else's weakness coming back to haunt them. As her guide had once instructed her, 'Compassion is something a Companion must learn to project as naturally as breathing but something they cannot afford to feel." The core of her credo was artifice. The centre of her 'verse the biggest lie of all.

Why now, after all these years did that knowledge affect her? Why had she compromised the tenants of her training? She knew even when she pretended to herself that she did not. Deep in that dark hidden place where the real Inara Serra lurked in the shadows. Afraid of

Comments
Thursday, 08 April 2004 18:23
Must have been some hard times to make the real Davey look older than the Captain. So, Zoe always hung around Mal but had a thing for Davey? Or, what was with the interplay between Zoe and Mal-who's-really-Davey in "Enigma"? I'm confused.
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Thursday, 08 April 2004 19:18
Ummm... I'm lost as to who was who. I thought the Captain, our Captain, was really Davey and the brother was really Malcolm, but now that seems reversed and the brother's Davey and our Mal is really still Mal. Couldn't quite track who was talking, and I wanted to because it's a really rich bit of dialog and storyline.
Friday, 09 April 2004 00:10
This part is necessarily confusing because there are layers emerging which only become clear as they separate further. To say more at this point would be to say too much. Ali D :~) You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 09 April 2004 05:27
ARGH! I'm so lost, but so loving it! :-)
Friday, 09 April 2004 09:08
Yeah, I'm lost too but I'm confident Ali has a Hands-of-Blue like ability to screw with our minds and then, with a sudden flick of the table cloth, make all the pieces settle into place.
Friday, 09 April 2004 09:51
I'm lost in the woods, and seeking that clear path!

"You think I'm not capable of pissin' people off my own self?" --loved that line, had to be our Mal saying that ;-)

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