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Into the Black- Chapter 2

Friday, May 12, 2006

Continuation of Into the Black-Chapter 1. Post BDM-major spoilers. Comment please!

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Zoë had been in her bunk all night. She couldn’t believe this was happening. Or rather she wouldn’t believe. Wash couldn’t be alive. This had to be a trap. Just a gorram trap. A she lay in her bunk she could hear Mal and the others talking on he bridge. Well actually, she could only hear Mal and Simon yelling above the rest. She stayed still as a rock listening to the conversation willing it to just be a dream. This didn’t make any sense. Then she heard Kaylee’s small voice come out among the rest. “What about Zoë?”.

Mal was quiet. Zoë, he had completely forgotten about Zoë. He frantically looked around but realized she was nowhere in sight. How could he forget about her? He had been so caught up in the fact that the Alliance wanted River again. He didn’t realize who they wanted to exchange her for. Wash. Zoë’s Wash. He had been fighting with Simon about the whole ordeal when Kaylee had mentioned her name. What was he going to do? It came down to a decision , his decision.

“Where is Zoë?”, said Inara. “She didn’t come in with the rest of us.”

“Doesn’t believe.” said River in a small voice. “She can’t believe.”

“Well little Albatross, should she believe? Is this for real or is it another gorram trap set up by the Alliance scum?”.

“How would they have a picture of Wash though?” , chirped Kaylee.

“Something doesn’t seem right bout all this.” , Jayne grunted.

“ Its real. Real as you and me. Real as the stars.” Everyone turned and looked at River.

“Great, crazy girl is at it again!”, grunted Jayne. He got up and headed out the door. “When you all decide you need a gun ya call me. I’ll be in my bunk.”

Simon, getting agitated, stood up to advance towards the captain. “We, you , can’t just hand River over like a piece of meat.”

“Captain, she’s part of our crew!”, Kaylee exclaimed.

“That might be so but so is Wash.” Mal turned and walked out of the room. The rest of the crew were left speechless and wide eyed.

Zoë heard Mal leave. At the sound of W

Comments
Friday, 12 May 2006 05:55
This is well-written. I must be honest though, the whole 'Wash is really alive' thing is kinda old and worn out. I realize that the gossip is that Wash will be back in whatever sequel they may have... but... I dunno.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 12 May 2006 07:16
No way, AgentRusco. The idea of Wash being alive will never get old or worn out. At least not for a hopeless romantic like me.

Please keep writing this series Wash86. I really wanna see what new twists you'll add to this so called 'old' idea.
Friday, 12 May 2006 12:08
Once again, wonderful. I believe too that Wash is alive.
Cant wait to see more of this!

CAROlYN*
Friday, 12 May 2006 12:47
Very good but like the last one way too short! Left me hanging and dying for more. Poor Zoe. I actually feel sorry for the whole crew, Wash included, as there can be no good decision here not unless Mal finds a way to rescue Wash AND keep his crew safe. Now, that there would be a neat trick. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 14 May 2006 04:23
Oh crap...Mal is in a massive rock vs. hard place moment:(

BEB
Monday, 15 May 2006 11:14
Way to short mate, but good netherless.
One point - The pace of the writing seems a little quick. Try slowing down what is happening and you'll find that your story just expands when you start to think about it.

Oh and there is no way that Wash is not returning in some way next time Joss returns to the 'verse.

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