Second Chapter

Sunday, July 23, 2006 5:06 AM

So the next part of my story is done. (Finally!) Took me forever to find the time to get it down. My beta testers are combing it now, though I still feel like soemthing's off every time I read it. Just wish I knew what it was. Oh, well, maybe one of my testers will point it out to me.

Well, they pointed it out to me, and I must say I'm embaressed. This chapter wasn't nearly as good as it could be, so I'm reworking a lot of it. Which means it's going to be a bit longer before I post it. Sorry, but I promise it'll be worth it. Well, maybe not this chapter, but I will make it up to all of you at some point, I swear!

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