HELP NEEDED

Tuesday, May 9, 2006 1:42 AM

I need some opinions, i'm writing my fic and unsure on one thing, ok here it goes the situation is this, A new character, Jorja, an old friend of mal's from way back, childhood friends, jorja was in the war and fought for the alliance, not her will though, she was faced with shooting mal or someone else would,(anyway this is just brief idea of what's going on, so don't commment on the lack of details)anyway decides to shoot mal, of course he survived, she's tried confronting mal several times to say she's sorry, first time she boards serenity, he points a gun at her and tells her to get of his ship, but when she finally does...., at her father's grave (General of the browncoats) she confronts mal who also happens to be there paying respects, there's an awkward silence............then???????????????
Now for the question i need help? What does mal say or do?

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